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1 Part Story 3.8K Reads 106 Votes
Michael Whitehouse By MichaelWhitehouse6 Completed

Frustrated by endless nights of scratching sounds and violent knocks running up the walls of his house, a man and his neighbour set out to catch whatever creature is the cause. Yet fear sleeps nearby, for is it a simple rat which plagues him, or something far more sinister?

I just read the title and the little description- I'm guessing it's the neighbor. Let's see if I'm right.
SharonPereira SharonPereira Apr 22, 2014 11:55PM
You're extremely talented. I don't know why I do this to myself but I'm getting quite addicted to reading one of your scary stories just before bedtime. V
debbiechism debbiechism Jan 22, 2014 04:53AM
Loved the story.It kept me on the edge of my seat till the end.
I LOVED THIS STORY SOOO MUCH! I'm so glad I have read this!!! its soo good! I Love the ending too!
I thought that the noise came from a monster or wicked entity. But the revelation revealed otherwise. Another terrific story!
BradleySmith8 BradleySmith8 Jun 26, 2013 02:50PM
I like your story, but the cover is the guy from disturbed the band i would try to change the cover in case they see it and try to sue you or somthing lol. Just trying to look out for people