This Story Is About a Lesbian Stud She's Cuban & Black, She's Had a Tough Life But Somehow Manages To Stay Strong. Alot Of Drama & Heartbreaks . Stay Tuned To Find How She Falls In Love & Her Life Turns Out [:
Why is this in all caps. I feel like I have to read this while yelling
& i know how you feel about your dad. I dont know nothing about my dad only his name and that's messed up. Ya know.
I think something really fuvked up is gonna happen between Melanii and Alex
you should not have put the " alex dream" part in there
but good so far