My Sisters Fiance (Editing)

My Sisters Fiance (Editing)

185K Reads 3.1K Votes 24 Part Story
stranger By LovelySacrifice Completed

My sister always had the perfect life, she was pretty. blond, tall, and skinny. captain of the cheer leaders. my mother adored her, and over all she had a great high school experience. i on the other hand had a horrible experience, i was the school nerd. i got picked on everyday, by my sister and her followers. i was constantly dumped in the dumpster.
but i grew up, i became a better person, and very successful. my life is now better, i have nothing to worry about. that is until the day my sister came back to our home town and ordered a 'family Dinner' to tell us her big news.
the news, she was engaged. 
Anthony is an amazing guy, he smart, owns his own company, and hes funny. but he doesn't love my sister. so what happens when we start spending time together, what happens when i fall in love with my sisters fiance.
do things like this ever end well, read and find out.

charm863 charm863 Jul 29
Can you spell the words correctly it's annoying to read a book and the words are  misspelled
TwistedDoubts TwistedDoubts Jul 13, 2013
ooh I love it!! I like the good luck part and her sister is a b****
mysteriousbird mysteriousbird Jun 20, 2013
i liked how she was like "good luck" i like characters like her. don't take s #$ from nobody
Donyas Donyas Jul 02, 2012
her sister acts super fckin b**tcy, !!!!! btw nice start!!!!:)
- - May 02, 2012
i really dont like her big sister she is so mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
asitchintime asitchintime Jan 06, 2012
Like this first chapter. Liking the story line, but it goes too, too fast. Might need to be separated a little. Also needs a touch of editing (punctuation and run ons), but regardless the story is good. So yeah, on I go :)