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In The Hands Of The Devil

In The Hands Of The Devil

85.8K Reads 2.9K Votes 28 Part Story
ᴬᴵᴹᴱᴱ ᴾᴬᵁᴸᴵᴺᴱ By Aimee21x Updated 8 hours ago

"Who are you?" My mouth moves on its own, Lucifer's smirk disappears as he freezes. "You don't know who I am?" I shake my head no, his voice sounds different again, his personality seems to have changed again. He suddenly starts laughing, a deep laugh that comes from deep down his throat. "I'm the shining one" he tells me, his eyes seem to be going back to their normal color. "I'm the light bearer"

#29 in paranormal 

Cover by: Clairetie

Considering the ranking this must be a truly good story. However, your grammar is appaling. I couldn't read further than the first chapter because of it, and because I have to watch the Wattpad advertisements. Maybe if you edit, you'll get more readers who are willing to be annoyed by Wattpad's ads.