Why to write close up instead of wide angle.
What do you do when a critique points out that you have way too many sentences starting with pronouns? How about those dreaded filter verbs? Or the passive voice? One solution is to go through each instance and play around with names, or rewriting the filter and passive verbs. The other solution, which will take your writing to an whole new level is to look at your Point of View and focus on getting tighter and digging deeper.