I'm not good at poetry, so bare with me! ...Or just don't read at all.
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@Aliel2013 Thanks :) Though it was just honest feelings wanting to be heard, more than anything.
@Seibie noticed you were a poet and had to stop by and read. really good from what i have read so far
Well, it's more like he's being a jerk. Never really could understand if he had a heart or not, haha. :D
Thats so sad! I like the part about the presents and how they're irrelevant in a relationship is love is absent. But, what do mean by "your dying heart"? How is it dying, is he like becoming a jock or does he have cancer? I'm dyyyinngg to know :)
Poetry comes in many forms and it doesn't have to rhyme. It's then that I get confused because what then makes this poetry and not a heartfelt letter to a partner when the other half needs something more? I'm sitting on the fence for a mo whilst I find out the answer...