wild unlimited

wild unlimited

110 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
COURTN3Y By laroxter Updated Oct 02, 2010

Jessica mysteriously disappears.....Jake is getting hunted down be another that wants power, but whatever it is they're looking for only Jake and his missing friend jessica knows....or do they? Joy a dangerous, adventure seeking girl decides to help Jake to the end. But will they survive? Join the epic story of our heros.

BreeLovesYouBaby BreeLovesYouBaby Jan 28, 2011
its good. Though there are some grammer mistakes and its a little unorganized. Maybe seperate the chapters and then it'll make your story look longer too :) 
                              
                              Though I do like it. Voted!!
laroxter laroxter Oct 02, 2010
yeah but i didnt get the chance to type the rest and now im alittle azy to do it