A Legend Changes

A Legend Changes

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MISThomas By MISThomas Completed

Cover Art is credit of @Neonpanda17 (member on Wattpad and very helpful)

A re-written, elaborated and expanded version of the legendary "King Arthur Legend".
After finding out a secret hidden from her since birth, Elara is forced to go into training under Delrand (Merlin's apprentice) who is rather stubborn. On her travels and through her learning, she uncovers hidden stories and meets the dreaded Mordred, who continues to seek her out. As the story unfolds, will she and Delrand succeed against their writhing feelings while battling with politics?

The story continues in 'A Destiny Revealed' and then 'A War Ends', please continue to read, comment, fan and vote.

MISThomas MISThomas Dec 08, 2014
@DrPhrogenstein haha thanks very much, ive never had a comment on my style of writing like tht but i find if i jst write without much thinking it doesnt make sense  n i want my readers to understand what i mean rather than jst see what the characters are experiencing :) cheers
the_consecutive_cat the_consecutive_cat Dec 08, 2014
I love how precise you write. There are very many adjectives and adverbs in every sentence. It gives the reader a vision parallel to what was in your head as you wrote it. Overall, your style of writing is fantastic! Good job!
Redirxela Redirxela Feb 19, 2013
I really like it but her dress should be floor length because in that time period it was appalling to see a woman's knees.
MISThomas MISThomas Mar 05, 2011
@SRBurke thank you, if theres anything you think should change please let me know n i will try to get onto it :) x