Harley is a boy who, one day, happens to stumble upon a lost girl with a forbidden past. He helps Emlee remember where she came from, and who she was running from. But, when the time comes, will he choose to give her up, or fight to keep her safe.
This is really good and so realistic. Harley and Emlee's conversation was absolutely real. You have really good details too. Keep up the good work!
not my best chapter :/ but i hope you keep reading. tell me what you think and definately tell me if you think it's actually better then the first, that would be weird. also keep my updated if you want me to keep going. thanks.
WOW! thank you, @manofsteele!! i love this stuff (as long as you still think it's good.) i love -good- criticism! i know all the spelling mistakes and stuff, but i suck at editing. thanks for the feedback, though.
i like the story its good, u should read mine! Its not as good, but u should still read it
I like this!!!! luv that he 's a runner. xD and "respectful"