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Who Are You? (Rewriting)

Who Are You? (Rewriting)

153K Reads 1.3K Votes 8 Part Story
Eluara By Eluara_Daniels Updated Dec 08, 2012

(WARNING: This story is rated R for being erotic so read at your own risk) Alesia survived the first 3 years of college and is pretty proud of herself. Her summer vacation has just started and in the middle of a shopping spree she is kidnapped. The strange man tells her that he will let her go after she is done learning her lesson. During this time he makes her his love slave. Who is this mysterious man who drives her body crazy with pleasure? Why does he seem so familiar? What is the broken promise?

Vicky17Steph Vicky17Steph Jan 30, 2015
WOW certanly i wanna know tje rest!! its just so secretive and chan chan xD update soon please
VenusLora VenusLora Mar 23, 2012
                              I dunno, I kinda like the duel-pov thing; it makes it like a movie, seeing both points of view at thew same time! :D
Eluara_Daniels Eluara_Daniels Mar 23, 2012
@Racquet haha this story seems to be everyones favorite its quite funny i seem to be very good at writing steamy stories good thing I have a dirty mind lol
HoneybeeS HoneybeeS Mar 22, 2012
This is  great i like the way you described what happened instead of just stating it which makes it more interesting.
xWhiteLightning xWhiteLightning Mar 11, 2012
A little weird, and very erotic, but it was well written and has a unique plot.  I found some parts a little like Kiss the Girls by James Patterson but it wasn't too similar.  Good job.  You have my vote.
azazellover azazellover Mar 11, 2012
This was interesting. I felt like, at times, it became a little robotic. Also, it got a little confusing when you switched back and forth between point of views. However, this was good. Keep it up!