(In this story Lori isn't alive and it's in the walking dead plot but I will do some adjustments. Also this my alternative universe and my story and if you don't like it because it's not in the walking dead don't read it then)
Rick and Elena ❤️
The inner voice of Elena was quite interesting to read, it had a slight intensity but allowed the reader to see her personality. The sudden hit of Shane on the door was enough to break the reader from their safe zone in the world familiar with The Walking Dead.
I'm so happy your happy writing this story. It definitely shows in your writing. I love it so much! If it's Shane I'll hate in the next chapter lol, that's ok because I don't like Shane lol.
Oh yeah!!! I'm loving it already. I like when writers change the plot and change some characters. It makes it more interesting to read. I love AU stories. I know you write so good. So I can't wait for more xoxo! Oh and it's Ricklena <3