The adventures of a maiden and her squoo (On hiatus)

The adventures of a maiden and her squoo (On hiatus)

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Fuzzy Puppy By fishyfis Updated Apr 17, 2016

Talia, a princess thought her life was perfect with her pet squoo. Then, when the legend of thw lost unfolds, she realizes that she was more than a caretaker to her squoo. She was his guardian. But why he needs to be guarded, she is yet to discover.

Great cover by ShadowDreamers

  • creature
  • cute
  • royalty
Writer_Fisher Writer_Fisher Jun 19, 2017
First of all, the overall story is creative, I don't think I've ever heard of a story anything like this. And I really like how even before Talia and her best start arguing over Jackson, you could tell that Talia had some sort of feelings for him. Good job, and I'm excited to read the next chapter.
TheWhiteSeries TheWhiteSeries May 13, 2017
This is a delightful tidbit of information and helps us visualise the creature more clearly
Writer_Fisher Writer_Fisher Jun 19, 2017
I like this chapter and how well you described Swuirm's  personality and relationship with Talia.
Xanaphia00 Xanaphia00 Sep 22, 2017
@ImperialSun I live how you vary your word choice to keep the actions interesting. The characters adde very cute. My only complaint is that it is occasionally hard to understand what is going on.
ImperialSun ImperialSun Apr 28, 2017
 #Fantasy @SicSemperT-Rex
                              Interesting ending. Wonder what's with the Squoo. I mean, why would she think that he's trying to tell her something? I guess she's a bit of an odd one xD.
                              Interesting ending too. Seems as if the main characters of that book are repeating their adventure over and over again.
AnInspiredMess AnInspiredMess Jul 29, 2017
My first thought here was: 'Isn't she shocked that the book seems to be speaking to her?'
                              
                              I quite like the last line, though.