Paul and Dawn: First Light

Paul and Dawn: First Light

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gymnastgirlflips By gymnastgirlflips Completed

Paul, now 17, decides to return to the Hoenn region to capture a Bagon and raise it to be a mighty Salamence. However, he doesn't realize that right after arriving an annoying cretin Coordinator would bump into him right when he's setting off on his new goal.

Dawn forcefully worms her way in Paul's plans in her quest to become a better Coordinator and the two struggle to get along. As Paul says, "When one life meets another, something will be born.".... but just what will be born between the two?

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Kawaiibear564 Kawaiibear564 Sep 02, 2017
Wait they're in Sinnoh... Ya know I learned my lesson and I'm not gonna ask.
G37R3K7 G37R3K7 Sep 30, 2017
Why did you select the copyright for your most viewed story as 'Attribution-NoDerivatives' instead of 'All Rights Reserved'?
rainbowrosesblossom rainbowrosesblossom Feb 05, 2017
Correction * I guess he was let down by Dawn's refusal to be called his girlfriend*
beefy-vibe beefy-vibe Dec 16, 2016
Holy crap! I am loving this so far! Decently written, the characters aren't OC at all, and you write Paul's character really well! Most books are just him having a 'soft spot' at the start, no development or nothing.
                              
                              So this was a breath of fresh air for me!
rainbowrosesblossom rainbowrosesblossom Feb 05, 2017
This story is really very good with great humour and originality to it. The development of their relationship is also quite amazing. This is my second time reading this book, but I am still enjoying it, unlike many other books. I have also read first faith.
beefy-vibe beefy-vibe Dec 16, 2016
Even though Paul's an ass, I couldn't stop laughing when he said "Dane" 😂