Paul and Dawn: First Light

Paul and Dawn: First Light

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gymnastgirlflips By gymnastgirlflips Completed

Paul, now 17, decides to return to the Hoenn region to capture a Bagon and raise it to be a mighty Salamence. However, he doesn't realize that right after arriving an annoying cretin Coordinator would bump into him right when he's setting off on his new goal.

Dawn forcefully worms her way in Paul's plans in her quest to become a better Coordinator and the two struggle to get along. As Paul says, "When one life meets another, something will be born.".... but just what will be born between the two?

Wait they're in Sinnoh... Ya know I learned my lesson and I'm not gonna ask.
jasmine779 jasmine779 Nov 15, 2016
Omg Paul is Neji from naruto looking at people then judging them
_Bangtan_Potato _Bangtan_Potato Aug 08, 2016
You called her by her real name. And yes, that's all I noticed
Correction * I guess he was let down by Dawn's refusal to be called his girlfriend*
beefy-vibe beefy-vibe Dec 16, 2016
Holy crap! I am loving this so far! Decently written, the characters aren't OC at all, and you write Paul's character really well! Most books are just him having a 'soft spot' at the start, no development or nothing.
                              
                              So this was a breath of fresh air for me!
This story is really very good with great humour and originality to it. The development of their relationship is also quite amazing. This is my second time reading this book, but I am still enjoying it, unlike many other books. I have also read first faith.