My Angel

My Angel

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Mia By MayaApples Updated Nov 28

... That's how how I became friends with a vampire. That one night lead to me saving the monster who saved me, hurting the people I loved, and ruining the ones I didn't. 

Well people, monsters, eventually it all blended together for me. The demons of the night didn't scare me. Actually, I wanted to become one.

I actually prefer a more amateur take on vampire stories.. because there are people that get too deep into it, while I just like the surface level- "okay, you're a vampire"
Same! I'm 17 1/2 and people ask if I'm 14 year old. And I've been mistaken as a 6-7th grader when I'm obviously not...
TheBatGames TheBatGames Sep 01
A vampire with a beating heart... Isn't that impossible, or are these nontraditional vampires?
crazy4manga crazy4manga Sep 19
Don't worry I get that all the time, I'm 19 everyone asks me if I'm 12..... 12!! Never anything else but 12 !
TheBatGames TheBatGames Sep 01
Isn't demon of the night something sexual? Or am I imagining things?
You write well, with short, declarative sentences. You also have an engaging heroine. The only problem for me was that I didn't quite believe your description of the monster and how easily he was defeated.