The Last Mage

The Last Mage

29.1K Reads 1K Votes 19 Part Story
Darkblade77 By Darkblade77 Completed

A boy alone in the forest with no memory of his past. He begins his adventure to recover his memory. He quickly finds out that he is a mage, an old and thought to be extinct race of magic users. On the way through his adventure he will make new friends, gain new skills and follow his destiny. Will he succeed in his quest, or will the Assassins Guild stop him first?

£  The story used to be called the forgotten past so thats why it says that for the chapters £

Medler360 Medler360 Jul 08, 2016
How does he know he need a weapon? I think you should put a little more reason for why he knows hea going to need it.
Aldriklim Aldriklim Nov 16, 2016
Adding the environment description and the light effects and like that it would have been a good chapter one
AidanColley AidanColley Dec 18, 2016
Good start and just like cobokfee I feel like I am there and I am living the story good job
hannudaya hannudaya May 19, 2016
Good. Adding a little more oif description will be muc better. Just a thought.
AidanColley AidanColley Dec 18, 2016
U messed up on saying if a fly landed on it but still amazing but just wanna make sure u go through and edit next time u make a book
God_SaveThe_Queen God_SaveThe_Queen May 21, 2016
Why did you at the post script in £ symbols? That doesn't even make sense