The Last Mage

The Last Mage

40.9K Reads 1.1K Votes 19 Part Story
Darkblade77 By Darkblade77 Completed

*Warning. The main characters kills. If you don't like that you may not like the book*

A boy awakes alone in the forest with no memory of his past. He begins his adventure to recover his past. He quickly finds out that he is a mage, an old and thought to be extinct race of magic users who wield immense power. On the way through his adventure he will make new friends, gain new skills and follow his destiny. Will he succeed in his quest, or will the Assassins Guild and Xavier stop him first?

flameloude flameloude Apr 13
Alright I understand that he doesn't have a name yet, but try using other things like, the boy or the man. You could even start of with a gerund(verbs with ing at the end) to signify it's him doing the action.
beastboy29 beastboy29 Jul 06
Does anyone notice how he spelled sword twice? Not trying to hate just helpful criticism
Medler360 Medler360 Jul 08, 2016
How does he know he need a weapon? I think you should put a little more reason for why he knows hea going to need it.
Aldriklim Aldriklim Nov 16, 2016
Adding the environment description and the light effects and like that it would have been a good chapter one
AidanColley AidanColley Dec 18, 2016
Good start and just like cobokfee I feel like I am there and I am living the story good job
hannudaya hannudaya May 19, 2016
Good. Adding a little more oif description will be muc better. Just a thought.