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The Last Mage

The Last Mage

35.8K Reads 1.2K Votes 19 Part Story
Darkblade77 By Darkblade77 Completed

A boy alone in the forest with no memory of his past. He begins his adventure to recover his memory. He quickly finds out that he is a mage, an old and thought to be extinct race of magic users. On the way through his adventure he will make new friends, gain new skills and follow his destiny. Will he succeed in his quest, or will the Assassins Guild stop him first?

£  The story used to be called the forgotten past so thats why it says that for the chapters £

flameloude flameloude Apr 13
Alright I understand that he doesn't have a name yet, but try using other things like, the boy or the man. You could even start of with a gerund(verbs with ing at the end) to signify it's him doing the action.
Medler360 Medler360 Jul 08, 2016
How does he know he need a weapon? I think you should put a little more reason for why he knows hea going to need it.
Aldriklim Aldriklim Nov 16, 2016
Adding the environment description and the light effects and like that it would have been a good chapter one
AidanColley AidanColley Dec 18, 2016
Good start and just like cobokfee I feel like I am there and I am living the story good job
hannudaya hannudaya May 19, 2016
Good. Adding a little more oif description will be muc better. Just a thought.
Jonelix Jonelix Feb 28
Maybe there should be a comma or some sort of stop here because it sounds like he is looking after a well, like that you take water out of.
                              
                              Intriguing start :-)