I know they are brothers but i just love them so much i might put some flowey x frisk not asrial ,FLOWEY!
I don't mean to be rude but please proof-read your story and improve your grammar. I'm not an English speaker myself but it you have the potential to improve your grammar and writes in a better way.
The story is okay, I guess!
Omg I had to read twice cuz I thought to toriel said tutorial lol -waffleXD
i ship fontcest but this story is kinda... misspelled. its not "torial", its toriel. frisk is not a girl, they have no gender. ehe...
How come, Papyrus refers to himself in the first person, but, then refers to himself in the third person in the end. Why?
Is it bad that I ment to search up papyrus x reader but my hands saud other whise?? Anywho onto storyy
You not weird... my friends hate me because I ship them.. what is wrong with girls and shipping yaois???