I know they are brothers but i just love them so much i might put some flowey x frisk not asrial ,FLOWEY!
I don't mean to be rude but please proof-read your story and improve your grammar. I'm not an English speaker myself but it you have the potential to improve your grammar and writes in a better way.
The story is okay, I guess!
Omg I had to read twice cuz I thought to toriel said tutorial lol -waffleXD
i ship fontcest but this story is kinda... misspelled. its not "torial", its toriel. frisk is not a girl, they have no gender. ehe...
Is it bad that I ment to search up papyrus x reader but my hands saud other whise?? Anywho onto storyy
You not weird... my friends hate me because I ship them.. what is wrong with girls and shipping yaois???
Ummmmm I think you spelled Toriel's name wrong...... I'm not being rude, love the book tho