The Lost Pup

The Lost Pup

62.3K Reads 1.6K Votes 13 Part Story
joshua By Xxjosh209xX Updated Dec 20, 2013

Ace is a five year old werewolf pup who lives with his brother who is the Alpha of the pack.But one day a rogue kidnappes Ace and leaves him in the wild, will Ace survive or will he end up dead?

Raizeil2 Raizeil2 Jun 03
Your story isn't bad. I've attempted to read a book where the author only wrote in "text talk". You know, things like "y", "ur", and "smh". (Sorry I couldn't think of any other examples; I don't use it.)
                              
                               Needless to say I did not finish that book.
You shouldn't say about your story. You should be confident in your book. And if you aren't happy with it, just edit it, which I've seen you've rewritten it. But also, you haven't been active for two years. So... yeah, there's that.
Amet-love Amet-love Jun 26
LMFAO YOU GOT PLAYED BU A FIVE YEAR OLD 😂😂😂😂😂
MidnightJadeWolfie MidnightJadeWolfie Nov 29, 2017
Phgsssttttt..... You will do fine just don't end the story in 5 chapters seriously... But you will do great!!
Yaoi4lifeforever Yaoi4lifeforever Oct 06, 2017
Now I want to hit her with both of my metal bats. Harley Quinn style.
ihasnolife3 ihasnolife3 Aug 30, 2017
Pack nurse *snorts* what are they gonna do, put some ice on it?