NEW: Introducing Tap. Addictive chat stories for your 📲 Now in 10 languages


42.2K Reads 1.4K Votes 21 Part Story
destiny taylor By mialove4evr Updated Oct 02, 2016

My father had did terrible things.Which cause terrible things to happen to me.It all started when i was born.My mother had been told she never be able to handle child birth but she keep trying.When she died my father went crazy.You see he was the Alpha.All werewolfs need there mate but Alphas need them the most.He was so crazy he killed the Alpha mate of 5 packs.They took they revenge on me and him.They killed him but i am kept as the omega as of the blue moon pack.

This is my story .

Not_Getting_Paper3 Not_Getting_Paper3 Nov 04, 2016
I love the Description where she's like "It all started when I was born" and like Lol!!!!!
Brixx2004 Brixx2004 Dec 29, 2015
Aww he is a bad character and he is Zac Efron who like REALLY HAWT!!!😫😫😫
DiamondSeaLife DiamondSeaLife Dec 08, 2015
Hi it was better. More detailed thanks. Remember to be detailed in your writing and u will do good
superstar1099 superstar1099 Dec 08, 2015
Yeah it's good. I agree with diamondSeaLife. More detail and longer will be good :)
DiamondSeaLife DiamondSeaLife Dec 08, 2015
Hi the story was going good but but it was a little to short. Details like how she was so afraid to see him and the things he did to her would make it better. Not insulting just want to help u get the reads