Love Me Like You Do (SKY HIGH//LASH)

Love Me Like You Do (SKY HIGH//LASH)

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Hayden Stronghold is the daughter of the Commander and Jetstream and the twin sister of Will. Unlike her brother, she has had her powers ever since she was only 10 years old. When she arrives to Sky High with her brother and best friend, Layla, will she get hero or sidekick? What happens when she caught the attention of one of the bullies of Sky High?

this is great, but i am confused is it hayden or erica? 
                              just remember for dialogue, you have to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. 
                              but overall, this looks like it will be an amazing story :)
I love this story! This is the second time I'm reading it lol. 
                              
                              You might not have noticed, but near the start of the chapter, you put "Erica" instead of "Hayden" a few times. But other than that, everything is great!