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Revenge Of The Fat Wallflower

Revenge Of The Fat Wallflower

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Nikithasuz123 By Nikithasuz123 Updated Apr 09

His eyes widen and his lips part in pain as he stares wordlessly at me and then at the large blotch that forms around his chest . He clutches it as he coughs in pain. 

I didn't get to push him into a sewer, but this feels so much better. 

I sardonically chuckle to myself before leaning in to whisper into his ear. 


- - -

 I was a nobody . A big fat wallflower that was always in the background. The only mistake I made was confessing to the school's prince. That day I was completely and utterly humiliated. It's been two years and now I'm back. 

Back for some sweet revenge.

#Winner of the Pre-Watty awards for best laugh worthy book. 

*Filled with humor and jokes that can't stop you from chuckling ;)

#47 IN TEEN FICTION! (20/12/16)

Published -January 7th, 2016

Cover credits to Ilovepizaaa.
 Amazing cover XD

Acid? That's a little OTT, acid isn't something people would have lying around it their homes, or if you're using a metaphor make it more clear lol
GarrettMock GarrettMock Mar 27
                              Wow, so things are quickly moving along! I like the flow of the story and how quickly things are moving, and that's very good! I especially enjoyed the last line of the chapter. I cannot wait to see the revenge of the wallflower!
atroXity atroXity Mar 27
                              The smoothness is wow! Fused in with humour, this chapter rocked!!! I was really intrigued by your book. I still don't know her name though...hahaha! I love the MC. I like how she is hooked up with her revenge. And the way she is so naturally funny. The ending rocked. Keep it up!
When you're placing a thought into a chapter, italics should be used. But because this is already in italics, you take the thought out of italics, if that makes sense lol? But don't use speech marks :)
                              Amazing chapter! Like, wow you know how to write. No grammatical errors and the descriptions were sufficient!
                              The jokes are hilariously funny! Love them. Love the parents, especially.
                              Looking forward to read more!
                              Just amazing! 
                              The dialogues and the story flow smoothly, nothing seems forced. The characters are very much relatable and hilarious!
                              I did not find any grammatical errors, maybe because there aren't or I was too intrigued in the story!