FILLOS Elizabeth Tudor: Ancestry of Sorcery

FILLOS Elizabeth Tudor: Ancestry of Sorcery

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THERESA POCOCK By theresapocock Completed

On her birthday, Elizabeth Tudor steps away from the celebration, distracted by an exceptionally brilliant harvest moon. As she gazes  upward, the familiar light surrounding the heavenly orb dances,  swirls, then coalesces, dropping out of the heavens to hit the  princess quite shockingly in the face. The moment the light touches Elizabeth, her skin begins to glow, which is most definitely a problem. Even more unsettling, Elizabeth soon finds herself casting about her  own orbs of light. These orbs somehow give her an unearthly control  over the mind and willpower of her loved ones and force her to ask the same deadly question that took her own mother's life: could she  possibly be a sorceress? 

 As the disturbing manifestations continue to multiply, a distressed  Elizabeth is suddenly faced with a new issue. She receives an eerie  invitation from her murdered mother, Anne Boleyn.  Unable to stop  herself, Elizabeth is swept away on a quest to uncover an ancestral secret that may change not only her, but the very fabric of England's future.

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  • england
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JEHallows JEHallows Aug 10, 2017
What a wonderful beginning! I love the concept (the blyrb really intrigued me). Very smoothly written, well polished (a definite sign of quality writing). Great job!
mszame mszame Nov 12, 2016
This start was pretty good. You captured the general sense of eeriness quite beautifully. I could feel Anne trepidation and that part with Elizabeth was fantastic. Looking forward to see how you portray Elizabeth Tudor as a sorceress😄😄
- - Mar 20, 2016
Love the pace, keeps me wandering whats going on. Will definitely read on. Good work!
DorothyOlsen DorothyOlsen Feb 19, 2016
I am obsessed! This opening is so GooooD...I have goosebumps all over. It just feels powerful! So much imagery, so much urgency! I'm dying to find out more!
NatashaJupp NatashaJupp May 31, 2016
An interesting idea,  and quite feasible,  I'm looking forward to reading more.
Trulyimperfect21 Trulyimperfect21 Mar 15, 2016
A wonderfully intriguing start :)
                              You have lasted out about an excellent and fresh poly and I honestly can't wait to read on !!
                              Good work!!