Afire Soul ▹ Draco Malfoy

Afire Soul ▹ Draco Malfoy

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🌙 By shivelight Updated Oct 16

H A R R Y    P O T T E R

When the Ministry of Magic detect the act of underage wizardry and attempt to have Harry expelled from Hogwarts immediately, Dumbledore then decided to found help.
      
He needs more help than the Order of the Phoenix, Juliet Stone.

- Based on Fifth year

The storyline is very nice, but the sentences aren't correct. That's a bit bothering while you read. And it's also deatheaters instead of deatheathers.
demoralize demoralize Jul 18
WTF ONE OF MY OCS IS NAMED JULIET STONE YEOOOOO THIS MAKES THIS STORY TEN TIMES BETTER
MckaylaHeilig MckaylaHeilig Dec 19, 2015
Hold on wouldn't you say you can rest now?.. I don't wanna be rude but youre creating sentences that are a incorrect.