The Shadows That Dwell Within (The Warrior Queens book #1) (#Wattys2016)

The Shadows That Dwell Within (The Warrior Queens book #1) (#Wattys2016)

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Belle Ree By BelleRee Completed

Three  bounty hunters, dubbed The Warrior Queens, must find Erebus, a criminal mastermind who has been unleashing beasts upon the continent. He is thought be after the caveam, a box with the ingredients needed to summon a demon. If he gets a hold of the demon - it's all over. 

But tracking Erebus down is harder than they anticipated. His identity is unknown, his followers are devoted and one of the Warrior Queens goes missing. The Concordian bounty hunters must work with Amitician bounty hunters - two countries which have always had tension between them. 

There are betrayals, many people die and secrets are unravelled in the first book in The Warrior Queens Series.

  • adventure
  • betrayals
  • bountyhunters
  • criminals
  • demons
  • fantasy
  • femalefriendship
  • friendship
  • kingdoms
  • love
  • magic
  • morallygrey
  • multi-pov
  • romance
  • secrets
  • wattys2016
mahana258 mahana258 Jul 18, 2016
I enjoyed reading this first chapter. You gave just enough info to make me want to keep reading, and your writing style is so clean and to the point, that it made reading this a total breeze! :)
Wya123 Wya123 Jul 06, 2016
Nice start to the story. Plenty of action and one has to wonder what caused just a harden warrior to allow herself to be hit. Flow of word are good and the pacing is fast.  It will be interesting to see how his progress.
MartyCameron MartyCameron Jul 10, 2016
This was a boss start to the book.  I'm loving it.  Also sorry for the spam comments lol.  I kinda derped it.
MartyCameron MartyCameron Jul 10, 2016
One more thing, I think you should have Adelaide say, "It couldn't be. Impossible.". Having her say that will have a strong impact with her reaction.
Danera_ng Danera_ng Jul 28, 2016
Isn't Erebus the embodiment of darkness from Greek Mythology? By the way, do you play Magic The Gathering?
Avalyn1584 Avalyn1584 Aug 30, 2016
This was a very good strart! I like the pacing, the information was well paced and not overwhelming, and most of all it felt original. Even though there's already tons of stuff out there like this, you've given it new life by writing your own take on it. And so far it's really paid off. ;)