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All the Stars in the Sky

All the Stars in the Sky

25.6K Reads 954 Votes 20 Part Story
Madi By otpforamerica Completed

Lucy- her mom died when she was little and her dad is a drunk. After taking years of abuse she ran away, only to learn that a year later her father died. Now she attends Fairy Tail Academy to attempt to finish her education for a chance at a new beginning.

Natsu- his mom has been out of the picture for a long time. but his father is rich. Natsu is the most popular kid in FTA (Fairy Tail Academy) but deep inside he wants to know what it would  like to love someone. 

when Lucy joins school Natsu takes notice. Will the struggle of their differences drive them away or will Nalu live on.


**Adult language may be used in the making of this**

twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
The w in what the isn't capitalized and there's a space after the quotation marks
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
He is could be he's and instead the last sentence could be more like "He didn't though, he just stared for a few moments."
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
The l in look isn't capitalized and there's a space after the quotation marks
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
Where Lucy is saying sorry at the end of the paragraph the sentences are a bit choppy
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
Look loke isn't needed but if you want to include it then it should be look loke I have my lunch etc.
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
A comma or period after I and a question mark after happened instead of a period