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All the Stars in the Sky

All the Stars in the Sky

36K Reads 1.2K Votes 20 Part Story
Madi By otpforamerica Completed

Lucy- her mom died when she was little and her dad is a drunk. After taking years of abuse she ran away, only to learn that a year later her father died. Now she attends Fairy Tail Academy to attempt to finish her education for a chance at a new beginning.

Natsu- his mom has been out of the picture for a long time. but his father is rich. Natsu is the most popular kid in FTA (Fairy Tail Academy) but deep inside he wants to know what it would  like to love someone. 

when Lucy joins school Natsu takes notice. Will the struggle of their differences drive them away or will Nalu live on.


**Adult language may be used in the making of this**

Let me rephrase this in my opinion:
                              
                              
                              I turned off my phone and stuck it into my sweater's pocket. Side by side, me and Natsu headed for the park.
MeadowLane5 MeadowLane5 Jul 19
How!!!!? I wish someone would blow up my phone like that *goes and sulks in a corner*
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
He is could be he's and instead the last sentence could be more like "He didn't though, he just stared for a few moments."
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
There could be a comma after Heartfillia and a comma instead of a period after the before in the first sentence
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
The a in are should be capitalized and there's a space after the quotation mark
twdfreak103 twdfreak103 Feb 02
The comma after the quotation mark and in front of loke should be inside the quotation marks