Stuck in the Middle(Completed)

Stuck in the Middle(Completed)

20.4K Reads 256 Votes 22 Part Story
Jazz Tayla By JazzTayla Completed

Stuck in the Middle is about a girl called Phoebe who lives with a normal human family but she is diffrent from them......

BeautifulNytemare BeautifulNytemare Nov 02, 2011
Gah! OVERLOAD ON CHARACTERS and cluttered story! xD I love complex stories with a lot of characters, but I'm like a fish out of water trying to keep up with the characters already. I can't tell your major from minor, flat, etc.
                              This is going to be fantastic on the positive side!  Happy writing! :)
ingridink ingridink Oct 27, 2011
@VioletFaith1905 It's not that you should be sorry, it's just something you need to work on :)
ingridink ingridink Oct 27, 2011
I really like the idea of this story but I can't read it when it's so cluttered like this and there's no punctuation.
undercovercarrot undercovercarrot Apr 16, 2011
@Nadie_Rae and @Lunadreamrealm pretty much summed it up :) Nuff said :D
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hillvolleygirl hillvolleygirl Feb 02, 2011
Special K!
                              
                              I  like your short side comments, they really add to the quirkiness of the story.
                              
                              Please read mine too: http://www.wattpad.com/979529-who-will-save-me-now
                              
                              *I just posted Chapter 3 today!
JazzTayla JazzTayla Dec 31, 2010
@Lunadreamrealm Thanks for the comment i will try and put more detail into it and i mostly did the description so people could picture the character