Stuck in the Middle is about a girl called Phoebe who lives with a normal human family but she is diffrent from them......
Gah! OVERLOAD ON CHARACTERS and cluttered story! xD I love complex stories with a lot of characters, but I'm like a fish out of water trying to keep up with the characters already. I can't tell your major from minor, flat, etc.
This is going to be fantastic on the positive side! Happy writing! :)
@VioletFaith1905 It's not that you should be sorry, it's just something you need to work on :)
I really like the idea of this story but I can't read it when it's so cluttered like this and there's no punctuation.
@Nadie_Rae and @Lunadreamrealm pretty much summed it up :) Nuff said :D
I like your short side comments, they really add to the quirkiness of the story.
Please read mine too: http://www.wattpad.com/979529-who-will-save-me-now
*I just posted Chapter 3 today!
@Lunadreamrealm Thanks for the comment i will try and put more detail into it and i mostly did the description so people could picture the character