Captive Of Darkness

Captive Of Darkness

3K Reads 53 Votes 9 Part Story
M. Jaclyn Meadows By M-Jaclyn-Meadows Updated 3 days ago

Breanna Jordan is an ordinary twenty year old, getting her first taste of life on her own. She's got a new house, new car, a decent job, and on top of it all, she's gorgeous. Her life is perfect. 
All it takes is one second to change her life forever. 

Breanna is kidnapped by a frightening man one night while returning home after a fun time with her friends. She's plucked from her own yard and imprisoned in the stranger's dark basement where she learns what Hell really is.

EllaRShaw EllaRShaw Dec 01, 2015
Amazing! It pulls the reader in, making them ask questions. Good start.
M-Jaclyn-Meadows M-Jaclyn-Meadows Nov 29, 2015
Thanks, sorry it's so short, it's a work in progress :) thanks for the votes. :)
mandoysmoysoy mandoysmoysoy Nov 29, 2015
You should make the chapters longer than one page. :) it's really great so far!
mandoysmoysoy mandoysmoysoy Nov 29, 2015
Interesting start. Wish it was a little longer but great detail!