Poems of my life:
mainly about who I like and the complications between teasing and hatred, people being in my buisness, family etc.
thanks! I wrote it about one guy in paticular but I moved on but it's still true.
thanks. And I hear ya. They cud flow more. Honestly I wrote half of them through blurred vision cuz I was crying.
Critique: I noticed the words didn't flow as well as they could have, but the thing with critiquing poetry is that it's damn-near impossible. Who am I to tell you to improve your feelings and thought patterns?
You are very talented!! I love"hearing your voice". I voted!!