Poems of My Life

Poems of My Life

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Where_are_you By Where_are_you Updated Feb 16, 2012

Poems of my life:

mainly about who I like and the complications between teasing and hatred, people being in my buisness, family etc.

Where_are_you Where_are_you Jun 09, 2011
@Perfectlylonely
                              thanks! I wrote it about one guy in paticular but I moved on but it's still true. 
Where_are_you Where_are_you Apr 09, 2011
@SingOutLoud
                              
                              thanks. And I hear ya. They cud flow more. Honestly I wrote half of them through blurred vision cuz I was crying. 
justchill justchill Apr 09, 2011
Critique: I noticed the words didn't flow as well as they could have, but the thing with critiquing poetry is that it's damn-near impossible. Who am I to tell you to improve your feelings and thought patterns? 
                              Love&Music.
                              
cowgirl14kms cowgirl14kms Apr 09, 2011
You are very talented!! I love"hearing your voice". I voted!!