Un-Voluntarily Falling

Un-Voluntarily Falling

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Jaimee Alexis By Jaimee_Lou Updated Jun 03

All ready to go see her aunt in California and meet her aunts new boyfriend. But when her boyfriend leaves his jacket with her and she returns it and finds him making out with her now Ex- bestfriend. She goes to California and meets her Aunts boyfriends Louis, Louis Tomlinson, from One Direction, she meets the rest of the boys they all become best friend and she may even fancy Niall????? This is a Tragic (But true) Story of Alexis Ames. (The true par is her backstory but not the part with 1D)

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Anything1D Anything1D Jun 23, 2013
It's not bad actually. Just a few misspellings and minor grammar mistakes but all-in-all, it's great :)
nouisftw1 nouisftw1 May 10, 2013
I like it so far! :) Good job! I think Alexis' is going to freak out on the inside but try to be cool on the outside when she finds out Louis is the Louis from One Direction!