See what happens when what seems to be a simple little crush on teacher that turns into love
Maybe a happy ending maybe not
Read This Crazy,Sexy, and Cool Story.
I feel like you listened to the comments that was kinda not so good and not listened to the ones that said it was a great story. Which it is. Please update and I am pretty sure that someone will be more than happy to beta for you. I would love to know what happened next.
this is....okay? I mean, I like the plot-ish. I really think you should edit your story, mainly because there is a lot of grammatical errors. Second of all, I agree with @Itsmylife12 because there is a lot of informal writing. However good job, all it needs is editing :)
oh my gosh!! this is so good lol ive become addicted to teacher student romances and this one is so original keep up the good work (:
OK! I love this story!!!
I was just reading to try and do a cover for it & now I can't wait for more!!!
I have the PERFECT guy in mind for Mr.Holly!!!
Im going to go work on the cover now if you don't care!