The Unknown CEO (manxboy) (On Hold)

The Unknown CEO (manxboy) (On Hold)

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cuddlemycolors By cuddlemycolors Updated Mar 13

After Jack gets dumped by his boyfriend and best friend of 6 months Jack finds him self heart broken. But what happens when he meets a new guy that just moved in  across the street. Is it a romance or just a friendship and does Dose Jack really know who this man really is? And what makes him so fall for him right after his break up.

At the age of 28 David Zaslav is a famous CEO of Discovery Communications, Inc. But David isn't really one for money so when he moves in to a nice quiet neighborhood where not many people know who he is and meets a very attractive young man will this be the start of something new or will David's money affect it? And is David ready to come out or is he reputation more important than what he feels for this new guy.

Okay girl. Idk what you were trying with this sentence. So I'm not gonna try and then later find out I totally messed up the sentence too. So author just sayin girl. Maybe reply to this what the sentence really should have said. Because I ain't got a clue
The P.O.V. you're using kinda confuses me, but all in all I like it
Okay. I'm getting tired of editing this book. And I'm only on the first chapter (not sure you'd call it a chapter tbh). So my biggest suggestion right now is please take your book down - edit it - then reupload it. Because some of the stuff you'd been saying so far is so off.
It's a break up. Idk what else you'd call it. But from my understanding. Yeah it's w break up
Also you could use ( ; ) in a lot of places too. But I ain't about to that. It'll take me too dámn áss long
Also girl. I didn't go and add all the (,) you needed because then I would have taken HOURS. So imma just let you know that (,) are needed in a lot of places.