Rogue

Rogue

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Danielle By Dani_1844 Completed

There are few in this world that any rogue truly respects, fewer still who they would be willing to die for. But there is one: with a coat of fire and eyes of ice she prowls her unending territory. She is ageless, beautiful, entirely unique. She is Rogue.
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Rogue. The very name strikes fear in the hearts of those who hunt her. she is not the only rouge wolf of course, but she is the only Rogue. On her way to the gathering Rogue finds herself in a rather tricky predicament. She has just two choices: Give up the life that has become her security all on a possibility or suffer her past for all eternity.  The trouble is the decision is not entirely her own.

15rscooby 15rscooby 6 days ago
Its really good so far and the writings nice, but I think you need to use more commas in sentences and mix up sentence length sometimes