**this book is unfinished and I deeply apologize
maybe combine some sentences into paragraphs, just so the story flows more.
I forgot to mention that you write descriptions really well lol So good job on that too!
The first paragraph completley captivated me, well done! Vote for you! :) x
write. more...and woah do you see all these comments? good job! read my newest parts and comment on them i read all your stuff.
lol thanks for the comments, ha i needed it.
....and the maker is a guy. The girls' name I have not yet released
I like this! your a pretty good writing but to keep your goal you may want to include more tags to its easy to find it! (: I'm voting!!!!