Enamored

Enamored

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Angelique By AngeliqueToledo Updated Nov 01

He caressed my hair gently, his fingertips touching large chunks of silky strands, "I wanted to give you a chance to win and escape me. I couldn't wait anymore. I need you now."


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Los Angeles; known as the City of Angels. It is a city of opportunity where the stars illuminate, a city close to breathtakingly beautiful beaches and where swaying palm trees decorate the modern city. However, beneath it's façade, lays the city of the wild and corrupt.

 The City of Angels is a misnomer because its citizens' souls are all conquered under the prince of the Nether Realm; Daemon. 

All except for one. 

Celeste is a 17 year old girl hoping to ease her parents' financial burdens. She is the beacon of light and purity that draws Daemon to her. He reveled in her innocence because he would have another soul meant for heaven damned in his realm.

Daemon proposes a deadly game to attain her soul with freedom to live as the prize. The rules of the game are now set and the players have been decided. 

However, as the game continues, a deadly love triangle occurs, and a potential war between heaven and hell looms. 

The game maker and his players might not be able to leave this game unscarred. 

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Cover by: errantce

#91 in Paranormal on 7/29/16

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Skalya Skalya Feb 19
Suggestion:
                              Changing 'my neighbors' beat up cars' to 'my neighbors' beat up vehicles'. This is so you do not repeat Cars in the same sentence.
I like your writing style, very smooth and quite simple. Your descriptions are on point and I like the narrator's voice. Good job!
OMG I just saw the trailer and I am literally freaking out!!!!!!!!!
Nina Dobrev!! And wow, I've never seen someone using a quote by Dante Alighieri.
Your story is great. The way your story flows is really smooth a lot of writers speed up their stories for no given reason or they are extremely slow in flat. This this gave me life. Keep it up
KateKay3948 KateKay3948 Feb 16
That was amazing!! I found your book through the book club and now all I want to do is keep reading, which I definitely will do :) that cliffhanger was great and I'm very intrigued by the guy from her dreams and the store. Also wondering what the fruit is and what will happen with that! Great job!