Enamored | ✓

Enamored | ✓

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Angelique By AngeliqueToledo Completed

[COMPLETE] He caressed my hair gently, his fingertips touching large chunks of silky strands, "I wanted to give you a chance to win and escape me. I couldn't wait anymore. I need you now."


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Los Angeles; known as the City of Angels. It is a city of opportunity where the stars illuminate, a city close to breathtakingly beautiful beaches and where swaying palm trees decorate the modern city. However, beneath it's façade, lays the city of the wild and corrupt.

 The City of Angels is a misnomer because its citizens' souls are all conquered under the prince of the Nether Realm; Daemon. 

All except for one. 

Celeste is a 17 year old girl hoping to ease her parents' financial burdens. She is the beacon of light and purity that draws Daemon to her. He reveled in her innocence because he would have another soul meant for heaven damned in his realm.

Daemon proposes a deadly game to attain her soul with freedom to live as the prize. The rules of the game are now set and the players have been decided. 

However, as the game continues, a deadly love triangle occurs, and a potential war between heaven and hell looms. 

The game maker and his players might not be able to leave this game unscarred. 

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Cover by: @pixilights

#49 in Paranormal on 12/20/16

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ImperialSun ImperialSun Jan 27
I got a character called Celeste too :). Though I use the Spanish pronunciation for it ^^.
sephy_22 sephy_22 May 20, 2016
OMG I just saw the trailer and I am literally freaking out!!!!!!!!!
ImperialSun ImperialSun Jan 27
 #Ethereal
                              
                              I noticed that there were tense issues throughout this story. Watch out for those when you're editing :).
                              
                              Now, on to the plot itself. I liked the biblical allusions in this ^_^. Now, I wonder if the box has six packs of containing six apples... Now that would be eerie...
PurpleCielo1117 PurpleCielo1117 Mar 06, 2016
This is a good start! Very captivating and mistake free to me. I could feel the emotions as well as the vivid settings. Love your characters name too, especially Daemon <3 
                              
                              Suggestions : 
                              
                              Some parts are slightly over described.
                              
                              Some phrases are bit weird.
                              
                              Just a few edits will do :) Good job!
ImperialSun ImperialSun Jan 27
Ohhh, I also have a character called Daemon (different story from the Celeste one) but with the alternate spelling of Daimon.
AngelicaJordan101 AngelicaJordan101 Aug 08, 2016
Loving this so far. I'd comment on the grammar issues but you said you'd edit. So let's give it some time. Lol am I the only one that wants a soap from this store or am I just weirdddd?