Within this short narrative I have compiled and refined the facts contributing to the current state of our existence and their dire implications.
Flawless prose! I love it! Thank you so much for sharing. I am already hooked, once again ^^ Keep up the outstanding work! :)
Hey! A quick suggestion on the book title!
'On our existence' would make more grammatical sense, and give a more professional sense :) I hope this helps!!
It is so refreshing to see a writer with an extended and sophisticated vocabulary weave together intricate sentences of thoughtful clarity. Well done, it's a promising start. I can't wait to read more.
My sister has seen incredible beings in which you could only dream of meeting, and really neither me nor her are afraid. Ironically, any and all of my sanity comes from the knowlege that there is more than this.
Now that was interesting! My mom has always had a fascination with extraterrestrial life... and I guess I inherited that from her. I actually do believe that there is life on different planets. And I also believe that some have found proof of this and kept it secret. But this was AWESOME!
I shall do just that at some point this morning (I work nights and get most of my reading done whilst at work)! :)