Trust Someone You Love

Trust Someone You Love

40.1K Reads 666 Votes 41 Part Story
Gabby By GabrielleRichards03 Completed

Kendall has extreme trust issues which influences her to hurt the one who loves her most, her boyfriend Michael. Together their like a natural disaster two people who aren't right for each other but the perfect match. With love like a inferno can they beat the odds of separation and heartbreak. (Read on and follow Kendall's confusing life, and Michael's struggle)      

"Just kidding, but I bet you'd be even prettier if you showed some teeth."  So I smiled for my crush, looking him in the eyes hoping it didn't look awkward.     He stared at me. "Yeah... you're gorgeous." He said it so softly.     

 My cheeks were glowing, I looked down     

"Did I even tell you how beautiful you look, not just today but all the time, did I tell you how I get nervous whenever I look at you, did I mention how Bad I want to kiss you. Don't say anything, I'm just going to go for it." Michael gushes.    

 I was stunned I couldn't say anything even if I pushed. He tilted his head and invaded me with his lips and tongue, the kiss was laced with chemistry smushed noses excitement, lust and something else I didn't quite understand, I knew it would be a kiss I'd never forget.

greatbookz greatbookz Oct 23
hey I don't mean to advertise but I really need some more votes on my chapter five...if there's any chance anyone could help me get to 20 votes or more I'd be very grateful <3 happy reading !!
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Feb 16, 2013
This was a good start. Just watch out for some mistakes you have here. I feel more bad for the boy then I did her, she seemed a tad selfish. Nice job!
Erose115 Erose115 Jan 22, 2013
wow this was really awesome!  i loved the beginning! congrattss
XeniaBolton XeniaBolton Oct 11, 2012
ohhh this is brilliant so far! I thought that this was well thought out and I enjoyed it! 
                              
                              I will read the next chapter now :D
Soniador Soniador Sep 19, 2012
Honey bun? Haven't read that endearment in a while! :D Otherwise good. I found it different that you used so little dialogue and instead spoke about the dialogue.
dreamy_ dreamy_ Aug 10, 2012
Sad.... I would suggest going over your work and editing it, need to remember capitals!