Determined

Determined

282 Reads 6 Votes 3 Part Story
Jenny By Jenny-o Updated Oct 28, 2010

When Lily witnesses a crime she goes to the police to help her out, but when the police might just be involved Lily decides that she must bring justice and rely on her self.

Join Lily as she journey's and learns of the true dangers in the world...

KAFrak KAFrak Oct 21, 2010
Pretty good and mysterious start, and the writing is good.
                              
                              
                              pst, check out my story...