The Outbreak

The Outbreak

711 Reads 30 Votes 3 Part Story
koolio By koolio Updated Dec 31, 2010

Wechesterson was a small town in Texas. Nothing real bad happened there. Someone might say, Wechestersin was, well, boring. And in small town there was always the outcast. Jake Olsen was him. Untill one day, a form of human rabies started spreading aroun the town, making everyone turn into undead. Fallow Jake as he tries to survive in this new world.

koolio koolio Dec 30, 2010
@MicaKaurAlexander heyy yea sorry lol i kinda go introuble so they took my laptop away xD anyways i gott it back so imma be posting..idk hen yet thoo so yeah
koolio koolio Oct 21, 2010
@frakkevin yepp there the same character and thanks for the grammar correction 
koolio koolio Oct 21, 2010
@frakkevin thanks for ur advice lol nd mkk ill check out ur story
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 21, 2010
in sight, not insight 
                              
                              MUCH better than the prologue. Are these same character? Overall the writing is good, its a little zombie 101, BUT zombie stories never get old anyways so good luck
                              
                              
                              pst, check out my story...
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 21, 2010
The writing isnt bad, the whole I'm not black, I'm mexican thing should be taken out it'..doesnt really matter, plus it's never good to have your character describe them self. Instead drop clues for we ourselves can pick up on the fact that she;s mexican
                              
                              
                              pst, check out my story...