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The Forgotten Ones

The Forgotten Ones

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Kitty By kittyrascalmeow Updated Nov 09, 2010

Until recently, Kaige has been unaware of the darkness steadily creeping closer. But when the strange dream that has been plaguing her for years, a dream of a mysterious city hidden deep in the mountains, takes an unexpected turn for the worse, Kaige finds herself thrown into the chaos of the disappearance of an ancient civilization. This leads her to a dark realization. Contrary to what she had originally thought, maybe the shadows slowly surrounding her aren’t against her, but are really helping her dig up the dark truth that has been buried for centuries....

idalisbabyx3 idalisbabyx3 Feb 02, 2011
Its a good story, but you should be a bit more descriptive other than that great story. :) ♥
LipsLikeAVampire LipsLikeAVampire Dec 09, 2010
Hey i noticed you were a fan of BrookeJade, and i also noticed some similarities between her story 'Secrets of the Dark Crystal' and yours, did you get your inspiration from her or something??
spongebobfanhaha spongebobfanhaha Nov 12, 2010
HEy can you guys read my story and give me some feedback!!?? 
FairyChasing FairyChasing Nov 06, 2010
I agree with loverofred. Everything is very... jumpy. And I think you could add a bit more description. Otherwise, it's a great story! I can't wait to read more :D
Nightmatrix Nightmatrix Nov 02, 2010
I like it so far; I'm guessing she doesn't know about the Forgotten ones yet.
Emo_Black_Wolf02 Emo_Black_Wolf02 Nov 02, 2010
wow that was great !!! :3 >.> now i need to watch something funny...