Damien

Damien

4.8K Reads 201 Votes 4 Part Story
Suger & Spice By MyOneAddiction Updated Oct 10

"All you do is sit around all day, locked up in your damn study! You never pay attention to me, not even a slightest glance, I'm better off leaving and finding someone else who will love me." 

As soon as the words had left my mouth, I knew it had been a huge mistake.

His eyes visibly darkened and a threatening growl escaped his lips as he took a step closer to me. I took a step back in response, but he took another. 

He was close, so close that I could smell his mouthwatering, masculine scent."If you go running in another man's arms, you will watch me tear him apart, limb by limb." He snarled, his canines fully visible as I shrunk away in fear, my back against the wall.

Before I even uttered a single syllable, he sunk his teeth in to my neck, claiming me as his... forever.

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meharrjdawg meharrjdawg Oct 12
It's perfectly okay to use a question mark, though. I know, confusing. This sentence is fine.
meharrjdawg meharrjdawg Oct 12
When speaking directly to an individual you need a comma before the name. 
                              
                              "You smell so good, Scarlett."
                              
                              Also, I wouldn't say the rest. The reader knows that is his only reply.
meharrjdawg meharrjdawg Oct 12
I'm not a fan of blurbs that seem more like an excerpt from the book. This part reads more like a real blurb to me.
whinnie2300 whinnie2300 May 12
I like it! Makes me seem smart and well read (other than Wattpad stories :))
hottaz2002 hottaz2002 Sep 05
Oh thank u jesus. It gets annoying when its the other way around
I_am_Love I_am_Love Sep 11
Nooo No one can ask a girl to be his girlfriend the day after they just met!