Alter: Eclipse | Book 1 | English Light Novel

Alter: Eclipse | Book 1 | English Light Novel

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Van Y. T. By cranerain Updated Oct 17, 2016

VOLUME 1 - EDITING
  
  Gacaea, a world where all magical beings and humans cross one another.
  
  Elius Kirkland is a young dutiful knight who serves privately for the royalties of Kingdom Memor. Princess Mylene De La Fontaine is his partner-in-crime. Youthful, energetic, and thirsty for an amazing adventure, she is impatient to know more about the world beyond the wall that binds her within the castle.
  
  When Memor is attacked, both of their lives are forever changed. All the answers they're searching for lie beyond that boundary, awaiting them to discover.
  
  Our tale thus begins here in Plecaerux, an average-sized continent of Gacaea. 
  
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  > I do not own the resources that I used to make the covers. All credits go to the right owners
  > All chapters are drafts. Will be edited once I've finished the book
  > Ranked #332 by 07/15/16
  
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  ©︎ cranerain ™️ 2016
  First book of The Chronicles of Gacaea, the Alter series

LunaFlamer LunaFlamer Nov 04, 2016
I swear that is one of the best summaries I have seen around here. Summaries are the hardest to write and you nailed it.
chocobros chocobros Oct 23, 2016
Gabriel is that one character that would make me question my whole existence, and it's 3:20 AM here. :')
fredsites fredsites 9 hours ago
Beautiful graphics, beautiful writing, and beautiful concept. I love the overall idea of this and I'm a fan for fantasy novels.
chocobros chocobros Oct 23, 2016
Two minutes into Alter and death already greets me. How. Wonderful. (⌒▽⌒)
Velairena Velairena Oct 13, 2016
I like how you described things, and the interesting start to the storyline. Though I do believe that "…" could be replaced by a few words describing silence. Like for example. 
                              
                              "He didn't speak, only stood and watched as the pregnant silence wash over the crowd…"
PhoenixWithWater PhoenixWithWater Nov 04, 2016
Your writing style is just 0-0 in a good way. I write a book about royalty but it's very easygoing.