i found my mate!!!! but her brother want let me have her...we'll see about that

i found my mate!!!! but her brother want let me have her...we'll see about that

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Anastasia By Wolfgirl75 Updated Jul 05, 2011

19 year old nick slade and his younger sister sierra slade live on there own due to there parents passing away when they where younger. nick is a jock who overprotects his little sister.but when a jock from one of the rival school wants his sister him knowing how guys think refuses to let him have his sister starting a full out war for both the boys and there schools the question is who will sierra pick her brothers and turn down the boy or will she pick the boy and betray her brother.

blueclarinet blueclarinet Aug 06, 2011
spell check seriously agencies really its against 
                              its good so far though just watch the spelling
yo_666 yo_666 May 17, 2011
You should really check your spelling, but otherwise it's great so far! I'm off to read the next part now-- XD
                              
                              xoxo
ImBlondeBeJelly ImBlondeBeJelly Jan 08, 2011
@XxMichasiaxX :0 you have NO IDEA what u r talking about!! They r the bestest!!!
anywhere_else anywhere_else Dec 31, 2010
its good so far, but there are A LOT of spelling mistakes. just a piece of constructive criticism :)