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BIG EIGHT : Academy Fight

BIG EIGHT : Academy Fight

707K Reads 15.5K Votes 25 Part Story
❄Faaria Shaik❄ By djicecoldgirl156 Completed

Hiccup Haddock,  Flynn Rider and Jack Frost  are new students at DreamDisney Academy. They meet Kristoff Bjorman,Merida van Broch, Anna Winters, Punzie Carona and Elsa Winters. But when a late comer arrive everything is upside down

They dig into her personal info and make shocking discoveries and their lives are at stake. Will they survive or go down the drain with her?

Okay there will be a few grammar errors cause this was my first book.

I sugest looking over spelling and quotations. They should be like this... 
                              "Elsa!" Olaf screamed.
                              "Yeah?" I relpied.
                              Instead of...
All you need to work on is grammar and dialogue. Every character has a different line of dialogue that is indented! I look forward to reading your other stories!
Jack:You like me
                              Me: *Your- maybe or do u like Elsa already???
garryerb garryerb Jul 08
it's 11:00am, and I'm reading a story  and comments I can't understand. WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE!!! 😶
Zan_kouv Zan_kouv Jun 09
I  'm sorry but I can understand who 's talking in each case . You should use speech marks!!
Hmh_831 Hmh_831 Jun 28
This book is good and all but it can be so hard to understand