Erens little secret

Erens little secret

16K Reads 577 Votes 6 Part Story
Oluto676_vkook By OlutoAckerman Completed

Eren is a 15 year old high schooler who is living with armin his best friend he was living a normal life until he meets a girl with red eyes and bites him what will he do when he falls in love with a boy called levi who is also hiding a secret behind his back.

  • aot
  • armin
  • eren
  • erenxlevi
  • ereri
  • erwin
  • fanfiction
  • linda
  • vampire
  • werewolf
  • yaoi
- - Jun 26, 2016
This may be because i'm a bitch when it comes to these things, but could you please add speech marks. I can't tell where certain parts end..... Apart from that first Chapter is good.
G4MZ33_M4K4R4 G4MZ33_M4K4R4 Aug 01, 2016
I'm sorry, I really want to like this, but the lack of speech marks is making it impossible
stripdaddy stripdaddy Aug 09, 2016
Sorry but could you maybe add speech marks and say said a little less
Roselleon Roselleon Jan 17
Honey please use these "__" them we will be able to tell when someone is taking
TaesLover16 TaesLover16 Dec 29, 2016
Could you add speech marks please it's annoying not knowing what they're saying and yeah also stop saying "Said" too much Thanks
Ugh honey when someone is talking use these " " example
                              "Eren, let me hug you," said Levi while blushing