My Free-Verse Poetry

My Free-Verse Poetry

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Pepper Boy. By Courchesne Updated Feb 04, 2011

My least favorite form of poetry, but the form I most use to get troubling/weighing  things off my chest.

imanxiousnow imanxiousnow Jul 18, 2014
God the emotion in this is so powerful. It takes a real talent to get raw feelings across in words and this... This is amazing. You have a talent my friend wow
VonCreep666 VonCreep666 Dec 10, 2010
You have a talent, this was just... amazing in every way. 
                              
                              The last part  ' Hello?' 
                              That I liked. 
                              
                              Tbh I can pretty much relate to this in my own way, 
                              
                              voted 
                              Dee.
gabbyalex gabbyalex Oct 22, 2010
I really do love this. .  i like how you tied it up in the end, all the descriptions started to paint a picture for me. keep doin wat u do <3
Whiskeynscotch Whiskeynscotch Oct 20, 2010
ok i voted...... 
                              But i'm gonna show you just how much i Love this beautiful piece...... 
                              
                              <3<3<3 
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Oct 20, 2010
You obviously didn't steal quite all my tears because when I finished reading these, my cheeks were wet. Still are. This brings back memories and it's absolute genius. 
                              ~Love
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Oct 20, 2010
For goodness sakes man! WHEN DOES THE AMUSINGNESS RUN OUt OF YOUR HANDS JUST LIKE THE SAND!? 
                              It's beautiful!
                              So, so beautiful!