My least favorite form of poetry, but the form I most use to get troubling/weighing things off my chest.
God the emotion in this is so powerful. It takes a real talent to get raw feelings across in words and this... This is amazing. You have a talent my friend wow
You have a talent, this was just... amazing in every way.
The last part ' Hello?'
That I liked.
Tbh I can pretty much relate to this in my own way,
I really do love this. . i like how you tied it up in the end, all the descriptions started to paint a picture for me. keep doin wat u do <3
ok i voted......
But i'm gonna show you just how much i Love this beautiful piece......
You obviously didn't steal quite all my tears because when I finished reading these, my cheeks were wet. Still are. This brings back memories and it's absolute genius.
For goodness sakes man! WHEN DOES THE AMUSINGNESS RUN OUt OF YOUR HANDS JUST LIKE THE SAND!?
So, so beautiful!