Heartless

Heartless

1 Part Story 836 Reads 15 Votes
MelissaBerks By MelissaBerks Completed

Katriona is a lucky lady. She has everything her heart desires... almost. There is just one thing getting in the way of her perfect life and she has figured out a way to sort that little issue.

jasonharris440 jasonharris440 Aug 12, 2016 06:51PM
Wow, I didn't see that coming Melissa, very nice ending to a gripping tale of greed and desperation, I didn't intend to read it now but once I started I couldn't stop reading & such great descriptives
MelissaBerks MelissaBerks Sep 11, 2011 05:28PM
@eddyevargas93 Thank you eddy, she definitely got what she deserved for sure! And thank you again for becoming a fan, I will be reading your story of the same name 'Heartless' :)
eddyevargas93 eddyevargas93 Sep 10, 2011 02:19AM
great story left me surprised at the end. i guess she got what she deserved .you have made a new fan today!
MelissaBerks MelissaBerks Sep 10, 2011 12:45AM
@LoveLuxury Thank you so much, it means a lot to hear. I have one of your stories to my library ready to read tomorrow :-)
MelissaBerks MelissaBerks Sep 10, 2011 12:43AM
@Giftauthor I will be writing more soon and reading your work also. Thanks for the comment :-)
MelissaBerks MelissaBerks Sep 08, 2011 09:25PM
@Giftauthor Thank you Giftauthor, your comment is much appreciated.