The Cutest Boy in Harlem - First Draft

The Cutest Boy in Harlem - First Draft

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matthew By TheLegendOfMatthew Completed

Last year, Declan was a girl named Josie. Josie was...pretty gross. But over the summer, Declan transformed himself into who he is now--a boy, and a pretty cute one at that. When school came around next fall, Declan was greeted with a surprise: Everyone thought that he was a new student, and not gross old Josie! Declan is now surrounded by girls who think he's absolutely ADORABLE, but when his cuteness catches the eye of the star quarterback, Noah, will their love last? Or will something gray take over?

CadetDante CadetDante Aug 04
"He had arthritis in at least twelve places" lmao oh my godf
Your writing style is so amazing! I love how your character's attitude is laced with sarcasm and your jokes have me giggling to myself. Great job!
OkieAussie_ OkieAussie_ Jun 30
So I look like I am lesbian because I like to wear plaid shirts?!
I like how this person is asking like what do they expect Declan to do say "um actually no im saving this seat for my friend Casper."? I just thought it was funny. But way to be polite whoever this person is
I can't deepen my voice. I end up mumbling or sounding angry :/ 3 years and I'll be on T so that'll be great :)
Jamainman Jamainman Jul 12
And in that very moment I thought to myself, "That must be one hot boy? Where is he?" *starts looking around*