Roommates?

Roommates?

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Destroy yourself By LukeHemmingsislove96 Completed

Jolene and her 3 friends, Kendal, Alyssa and Bri are all going to Minnesota 
 State University. Her other 3 friends Kaitlin, Gianna and Elysa are all going to college in New York. When Jolene learns she has a guy roommate, she is immediately nervous to be in the room. Dalton, her roommate, is from Austin, Texas. She will hate him in the beginning then start to fall in love with him.

Can u at least space when they are talking I got confused in who is saying what.
It's good! I have a couple of factual corrections though; there isn't a steak n' shake within 6 hours of minnesota unfortunately :( and yes, UofM is huge! It takes up over 10 square miles!! (I live close to  it and my entire family went there!)
HAHAHAHAHAAAA I KNOW THE REAL PERSON UR TALKING ABOUTNMWAHAHAHAHA
I_love_meee I_love_meee Apr 09
Wait what's with the picture?? Ik a guy on Instagram who looks like that..
I_love_meee I_love_meee Apr 09
My best friends name is spelt Gianni but it's pronounced Jhonny. He's rlly cool😂🔫
Ok there's a lot of POV changes and we don't even know these people I'm so confused!