Alone in the Crowd

Alone in the Crowd

1K Reads 35 Votes 6 Part Story
Michiko Tachibana By tachibanamichiko14 Updated Nov 23, 2010

She seems to be happy on the surface but her eyes tell otherwise. Her sweet smile is just a mask. There's a mystery that lies behind that deceptive facade. It's the thing that Bryan always notice while staring at her. What will he do when all of a sudden, he finds himself slowly being drawn to the school geek? Will he break away from the attraction or just go along with it?

tachibanamichiko14 tachibanamichiko14 Oct 24, 2010
@natsuriayuko wow.. another compliment from you.. Haha.. Thanks.. Oh.. And I'll try to apply your suggestion on the next chapter and on my other stories as well.. haha.. lovelotz! ^_^ 
tachibanamichiko14 tachibanamichiko14 Oct 23, 2010
@MimiMumu haha.. I'm sure I know who that person is.. Anyways, thanks for reading my story.. hehe.. ^_^
LadyStalker LadyStalker Oct 23, 2010
aside from tense inconsistency, i think this one is rather good
MimiMumu MimiMumu Oct 23, 2010
hey there! a friend of mine told me to force you to write more.. XoX can u guess who??? ur story is not that bad, so keep your head working
tachibanamichiko14 tachibanamichiko14 Oct 22, 2010
argh! I really suck at describing the character's apearance and the story's setting.. Do you have any suggestion/ advice regarding that?
natsuriayuko natsuriayuko Oct 21, 2010
@tachibanamichiko14 
                              
                              Yay! Hahah.. okay.. I'll advertise your story.. =) i'm waiting for the next chapter, mah!