Lethal Attraction

Lethal Attraction

784 Reads 20 Votes 2 Part Story
Rita By JezzyBell Updated Nov 21, 2010

Part of my collection of short stories. 
1. Lethal Attractions- This is NOT a vampire story, there just so happens to be a vampire in it. And he isn't your 'typical' kind either. And no, it's not a romance although there could be some aspects of romance in it...
I have this annoying habit of plucking story lines seemingly out of thin air. They just stroll into my mind out of nowhere. Sometimes I ignore them even when I know I shouldn't. So, I'm going to start writing down most ideas that i have that I just don't have the time and effort to turn into novels here. Hope you enjoy them=D

arshiakola arshiakola Nov 01, 2010
oh i love it.. thanks for asking me to read.. you are indeed a wonderful writer, i read the story in great flow and ease..enjoying it very much... i hope u will write more soon.. please update..
anakelia anakelia Oct 29, 2010
*voted* pretty much agree with everyones positive feedback so I won't repeat it. :D
                              
                              Anyways please check out my story I'd love toknow what you think.
BeautifulLies BeautifulLies Oct 26, 2010
@JezzyBell Hahaha! You are welcome. No problem =) Sorry it took me so long to get to it.  But yea I read Steph's comment and I Immediately asked myself "In what way is that constructive?  It's more rude than anything."
                              
                              Waiting fro the next update! =)
JezzyBell JezzyBell Oct 26, 2010
@BeautifulLies Haha, thanks. And I know what you mean about 'constructive criticism'. Had a right rant at steph there just explaining to her what it meant.
                              Thanks again for reading, glad you liked it!
                              x
SierraJaid SierraJaid Oct 23, 2010
I didn't like it , i loved it !! Hahaha... And cöntrary to staph here , i liked ur discription. I knw the beginning of the story needs discriptions a bit more than other chaps to put the readers in the moment. Good work !! Voted.
luvluver luvluver Oct 23, 2010
wait. where's the rest of it?!?! D:
                              hahah lol upload soon!! :DD