Weight Gain

Weight Gain

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weightlygained By weightlygained Updated Aug 19

Cleo lived her life with her strict healthy  SKINNY mother. She did sports every day but hated every second of it. What happens when she has to go and live with her strange, messy and over weight father for 6 months 
It's a new school, new life and more food

xximanerdybirdyxx xximanerdybirdyxx Dec 20, 2016
There are grammar issues and areas that need punctuation but overall I liked it.